Comments on: “Organized” a short work of fiction, that rings true

By: Jessica The Rock Chick

Jessica The Rock Chick — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 14:42:10 +0000

Wow. Your story gave me goose bumps, Shelly, and a real appreciation for my somewhat messy and unorganized life. It reminds me of people who save things for a special occasion that might never come. Every day is special and every minute you get to spend with someone is special and what a great reminder your story is. Jessica The Rock Chicks last blog post..Food For Thought (Thursday Thirteen #40)

By: cindee

cindee — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 04:47:44 +0000

Yikes, Poor lady. I know someone just like that. She should read this story. I am lucky to get one thing done each day. I guess I just don't really care if my house is spotless and all that. I would rather have fun(-: It is sad to think people actually worry to death over stuff like that. cindees last blog post..Lord Baltimore

By: Jeni Hill Ertmer

Jeni Hill Ertmer — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 03:21:05 +0000

Really gives me some good vibes here as I sit in the midst of what could possibly be one of the most disorganized houses -maybe even take top honors there -in Pennsylvania, at least. And ya know what, I think I will take this story as a warning that a little disorganization and procrastination are both good for body and soul.
Great story!

By: eve

eve — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 00:50:53 +0000

That story had me at hello and could have been my story a few years ago. I was stopped from all that organizing by falling through a hole and breaking one foot and spraining the ankle on the other. I was carrying a load of books to give to the Goodwill at the time. It was probably the best thing that could have happened to me. I went back to the way I as before "I must get organized" mania hit me. Now I am a happy slob and so is my family..LOL eves last blog post..PHYSICAL, MENTAL, SPIRITUAL BEINGS

By: Freelance Guru

Freelance Guru — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 21:52:29 +0000

I would of loved to of heard you tell that story…

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By: Vixen

Vixen — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 16:21:15 +0000

Great story Shelly. I know you usually tell stories out-loud, but you did a FANTASTIC job telling this one.

By: sophiagurl

sophiagurl — Fri, 01 Aug 2008 16:05:33 +0000

That was an awesome story my dear! really had me going. and the poor “organized” lady geez! I bet her house was clean as a whistle after she finished with all the chores.

I don’t want to die yet, so not doing the house chores could actually save my life! hahaha thanks for the lovely story dearie.

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